A Level Media 1 M Bush

Personal feedback: - 2nd night car scene needs audio editing - need to clearly hear what is being said (possible lower the instrumental) - possibly shorten the scene of me working on the computer - fix the last couple of scenes to bring it to a smooth ending - make them have a narrative behind it  Teacher feedback:

trailer targets: - film football scene to show binary opposition between 'the hood' and football - film scenes with digetic sound to create narrative  poster targets: - complete a poster draft that appeals to a female audience  - add more poster credits to make it seem more professional e.g. age rating, social media platforms, etc. - take more photo graphs and experiment with the composition of the photographs 

trailer targets: - edit footage to make minimum 60sec - film football scene to show binary opposition between 'the hood' and football poster targets: - complete a poster draft that appeals to a female audience  - add more poster credits to make it seem more professional e.g. age rating, social media platforms, etc. - take more photo graphs and experiment with the composition of the photographs 

I improved/completed: - the the size of the title and tagline (added drop shadow) - corrected spelling mistakes - added reviews - added credits - added release date - add age rating  - added cast names still need to: - think more about the positioning of the credits - maybe include more? - maybe make my slogan bigger so that it appears more clear for the audience  I improved/completed: - the positioning and size of text - added a photo to the template - added credits - added release date still need to: - add more film poster conventional credits - make the cropping of the image look more professional - maybe blend it into the background - maybe add some reviews - maybe add a conventional background linked to the theme (e.g. estate or football pitch) 2nd draft has a football replacing the 'o' - you said to see how it looked  I Improved/completed: - the positioning of the text - film review ratings ...

Poster 1 Inspired by the Kickabout film poster. I liked the way how the editor used a high angle shot to signify the significance of the sports environment. I wanted to re-create this by using similar conventions but instead of using trees to convey the idea of isolation, I used the darkness to show this environment where the protagonist can show his true potential.  Poster 2 Inspired by the Gridiron Gang film poster. The close-up on the ball was an aspect i was trying to re-create as the main theme of the trailer is all about choices and what one is best for his future. The positioning of the hand will be used to show the audience binary opposition with the protagonists thoughts and feeling.  Poster 3  Half and half. Left side looking at he a football pitch while wearing football training kit and right side wearing a tracksuit starring at a council estate.  Poster 4 Over the shoulder shot of protagonist look through the astro tur...

upload video 1st draft feedback: - good use of match-on-action - do photo shoot planning - find a better urban representation of Northolt not 'Northolt Village' - establishing shot - less camera shake  - no audio distribution (e.g. wind) - aspect ratio - same as footage - other scenes & dialogue - more drama/emotion/action - Voice-over & music