2nd truth be told


Personal feedback:
- 2nd night car scene needs audio editing - need to clearly hear what is being said (possible lower the instrumental)
- possibly shorten the scene of me working on the computer
- fix the last couple of scenes to bring it to a smooth ending - make them have a narrative behind it 
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