A Level Media 1 M Bush

Personal feedback: - 2nd night car scene needs audio editing - need to clearly hear what is being said (possible lower the instrumental) - possibly shorten the scene of me working on the computer - fix the last couple of scenes to bring it to a smooth ending - make them have a narrative behind it  Teacher feedback:

trailer targets: - film football scene to show binary opposition between 'the hood' and football - film scenes with digetic sound to create narrative  poster targets: - complete a poster draft that appeals to a female audience  - add more poster credits to make it seem more professional e.g. age rating, social media platforms, etc. - take more photo graphs and experiment with the composition of the photographs 

trailer targets: - edit footage to make minimum 60sec - film football scene to show binary opposition between 'the hood' and football poster targets: - complete a poster draft that appeals to a female audience  - add more poster credits to make it seem more professional e.g. age rating, social media platforms, etc. - take more photo graphs and experiment with the composition of the photographs